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Penname: Jantique [Contact]
Real name: Jantique Fielding Member Since: 25 Mar 2008
Membership status: Member
Love both Stargates; don't believe in OTP in the Pegasus galaxy (as long as it's m/m slash!; have written Voyager, Sentinel, SG-1 and now SGA!

Reviews by Jantique

Summary: 'You should get married more often,' Rodney said.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4299; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Jul 2008; Published: 30 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
30 Jul 2008
Good story! Poor John--but as long as there's a happy ending, that's what counts! Very funny and romantic.

Keep up the good writing!
Chapter 1: Story

Summary: Rodney was reeducated, given a good job far from the capital city.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Character Study, Drama, Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4275; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Aug 2008; Published: 03 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
08 Aug 2008
Poor Rodney! Bereft of his mind, power of speech and John - the worst that could happen to him! And he really rescued himself, didn't he? Well-written.

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Once he remembered enough to have reason to try and find John, nothing could stop him. Thanks!
Chapter 1: Beast of Burden
Blink by lavvyan [PG-13]
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Summary: I am going to tell you a story. About Dr. McKay and how he bought an eye from me, and how that one small act led to the strangest night in my entire life.

Written for the mcshep_match challenge on LiveJournal.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Established Relationship
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4883; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04 Aug 2008; Published: 04 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
08 Aug 2008
I LOVED your take on "eye for an eye". You are so creative! As usual, a lovely love story. It's good to see Rodney saving John, too.

Keep up the good writing!
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: He wakes to the distant shush of tires on wet road, Rodney's hand curling warm and possessive around his shoulder to pull him closer. The window at the foot of the bed is thrown open and Rodney's fingers are still damp with rain, gritty from touching the sill they haven't cleaned since the summer months.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 822; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Aug 2008; Published: 05 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
07 Aug 2008
I could hear the rain, feel the warmth. Very romantic but not sappy.

Keep up the good writing!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wardrobe by Steinbeckslut [NC-17]
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Summary: John Sheppard takes a special interest in all of the members of his team. It's normal to do that, right? He even knows every item in Rodney's wardrobe. It's not an obsession. And it's so not a problem!

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4675; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Aug 2008; Published: 07 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
08 Aug 2008
Very well-written; funny and warm and awww!!!

Keep up the good writing!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: In his trip to the future, John saw a possible reality in which his team died and Earth abandoned Atlantis. He managed to prevent the first, but now the IOA has recalled Colonel Carter and replaced her with Richard Woolsey, as holo-Rodney predicted. Determined to insure a better future for Atlantis and the Pegasus Galaxy, he gathers a group of trusted friends to help him guarantee Atlantis will remain operational no matter what anyone else has to say about it.

Updated: 29 Aug 2008; Published: 10 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
12 Sep 2008
This is a wonderful story in an excellent series. I enjoyed the characters, who are very true to canon. And it is funny! Who knew a revolution could be so much fun?!

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Revolutions are always fun, except for the ones with all the shooting and beheading and such instead of spaceships, sex, and talking cities.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Point of Origin

Summary: Daniel Jackson feels that John and Rodney need a gentle push...and pays a visit to Atlantis to help them along.

(I've listed the story as AU - simply because Oma appears at the end when she should be battling Anubis)

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Daniel Jackson, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2763; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Aug 2008; Published: 12 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
13 Aug 2008
I enjoyed this story. Everyone needs a "guardian angel"!

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you enjoyed it...and I\'ve a few more ideas, so more writing to come!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
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Summary: After the events of "The Shrine," John finds Rodney sitting on the pier.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 710; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Aug 2008; Published: 23 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
26 Aug 2008
Oh, I'm so happy to see a GOOD ending to this ep! Damn right it was John who was there for the Rodney the whole time!
This is why fanfiction exists: to make right what was wrong.

Keep up the good writing!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney McKay can't lie. He really can't. He's lost entire fortunes playing poker because he can't keep from giving himself away.

So when he lies and tells his sister that he and John Sheppard are involved--he and the very straight John Sheppard--you know things are going to go terribly, horribly wrong.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 7098; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Aug 2008; Published: 26 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
26 Aug 2008
Sweet story. Romantic and funny. R and J were very believable. I liked Aunt Marge, too.

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. :)
Chapter 1: Mer and the Colonel
Republican by slybrarian [NC-17]
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Summary: Lorne joins McKay and Sheppard for a bit of extracurricular fun, and finds that it doesn't go quite as he imagined - or rather, it goes as he really should have imagined, if he had been thinking about things clearly instead of "this will be so hot."

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash, Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, First Time, Friendship, Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1631; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Aug 2008; Published: 26 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
26 Aug 2008
OMFG! I totally lost it when I read the first line! And a wonderful story to follow. Interesting that Evan's taking control of the situation and he wants to be fucked. There's another story in there, you know there is!

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Oh, sure, there\'s probably going to be a couple more stories related to this one.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
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Summary: It's a late night in the lab, but as long as there's coffee....

Categories: General
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 556; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Aug 2008; Published: 26 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
29 Aug 2008
I like it! I'd love to see this as part of a longer piece!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: Ashtaroth has a few issues with the idea of Rodney being killed by an ascension machine.

Updated: 26 Aug 2008; Published: 26 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
29 Aug 2008
I really enjoy this series; hope you will write more. A very good "improvement" of the original ep!

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
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Summary: Atlantis has gained its independence. Now they must stand on their own and prepare to rid Pegasus of the Wraith. At the same time, they may have to fight against enemies both in Pegasus and back on Earth who have their own objectives for Atlantis.

Updated: 11 Sep 2008; Published: 01 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
12 Sep 2008
Great series! I'm so happy to see Independent Atlantis. These stories have a lot of LOL humor--great stuff. I hope you will continue the series. PLEASE find someone for Rodney (NOT Katie!)!

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: I will find someone for Rodney eventually, although I\'m not sure who. I have Jennifer with Ronon and there\'s not a lot of other options. Zelenka might be a possibility, but I think he\'s still pining for Elizabeth. However, I can say that in my next series he will find his One True Love after a Long Epic Robot-Filled Romance.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Problem Child
Second Chance by Madison [NC-17]
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Summary: Major Sheppard always wondered what his life would have been like if he had gone on the Atlantis expedition instead of going home at his father's request. Spoilers through Season 4 'Outcast".

Updated: 19 Dec 2009; Published: 01 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
11 Sep 2008
Trying to think of an original way to say, "This is a wonderful story!" Well, everyone is right. I was particularly impressed by your vivid descriptions and meticulous attention to detail. Your description of Virginia is lovely, as is the horseriding. When I write, I hurry through the scenery to get to the point, but you take the time to paint the scene.

When I read about how Atlantis drowned, I thought, 'oh, yeah, right!', at the same time wondering how you could possibly "fix" it!

Oh, and your characters. Jim Banks is a wonderful OC. He feels very real-and so do the horses and dogs!

I'm SO glad a) John & Sheppard & Rodney got together, and b) John got to say goodbye to Jim.

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: I always worry that my descriptions are going to cause people to start skimming :-)I\'m glad to hear that you enjoyed them. You also noticed how I almost painted myself into a corner over wiping out everyone in the expedition as well! Your comments about Jim and the animals made me smile--Jim has become a real favorite with me and the animals *live* with me! :-) Thank you for such nice FB!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Going 'Home'
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Summary: Evan receives a package.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne
Genres: Drabble, Established Relationship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 479; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Sep 2008; Published: 03 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
05 Sep 2008
How frustrating?! Is it sex toys? (One can only hope!)
Chapter 1: New Toys
Yes, Really by thegrrrl [PG-13]
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Summary: The morning after. John's a little bit uncertain.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 989; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Sep 2008; Published: 12 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
12 Sep 2008
Good story! I'm glad John has an open mind and is willing to come around to Rodney's opinion ("like, the best sex ever.")!

Keep up the good writing!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Even after twenty years, Rodney still has no idea how to raise children. Kidfic, futurefic. Past character death.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 16276; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Sep 2008; Published: 14 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
16 Sep 2008
This is a beautiful story, superbly written. I cried. But you're wrong about one thing - I think Rodney is a great father!

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: I think he tries very hard, too. Thank you :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
17 Nov 2008
When you read a story for the second time, you come at it differently. You know who the characters are and what happens, so you can concentrate on the relationships and interaction. I still think this is an excellent story. And I cried Again!

When Rodney says, """The last thing your father said to me was to tell you he loved you. So. Patrick. Your father loved you." He swallows. "And he would love you, today, if he was still here." Beautiful. Also, later, "the siblings, who aren't siblings at all except in every way that matters". You have such a gift for words.

I'm going to say it again, because I hope you will: Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Oh, wow, thank you so much. Especially for the encouragement, thank you.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Zelenka's watching the waves, and the waves are watching him back.

Categories: General
Characters: Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2186; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Sep 2008; Published: 16 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
26 Sep 2008
This is so cute! I wish you had pictures of Baby. Maybe you can start a series: The Fauna of Atlantis!

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: I\'m sure the Biology department will appreciate having the fauna so close to hand -- well, until their lunches start disappearing, anyway. ;-)

Thanks!
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: Dusty Mehra's POV of the episode "Whispers"

Geez, it was like being trapped in High School

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Character Study, Episode Related, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2545; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Sep 2008; Published: 18 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
26 Sep 2008
Gotta tell you, I did not enjoy the episode (just not into the spooky zombie thing), but I did enjoy your story! I'd like to see more stories with this team. Which just goes to show: Fanfic RULES!

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: So sorry I haven\'t responded!!! Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
Chapter 1: First Impressions